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Writing Hell

Writing Hell

Writing Hell

7.91142.6K
Comic,Webtoon,Josei(W),Adult,Mature,Smut,Slice of Life
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The art is great, the kid is cute but the FL is a drag. They're trying way too hard on the plot but it's making it worse. Bad plot with writing ambitions that end up being it's biggest flaw. FL likes to hear herself "think" and comes up with completely unrealistic scenarios. "How can I have sex with my student while making it seem like I don't want to by coming up with the stupidest plans imaginable". Like it wouldn't be weird or stand out at all if a lecturer skulked around following her students and of course the perfect punishment for a delinquent is to stick him next to the hot teacher he has a crush on... 😑
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